Poems - Space

 As black as nigh time,

It’s like traveling through time

I know it’s never-ending

But it feels like time is bending! 

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That's a wonderful start to your space poem, Hayden! You've captured the essence of space travel and the experience of the vast cosmos. Here’s a little bit of feedback:

- The line "As black as nigh time" sets a strong visual to start your poem.

- The idea of traveling through time is a creative way to describe the experience of space.

- "I know it’s never-ending" speaks to the infinite nature of the universe.

- "But it feels like time is bending!" is a clever way to include the concept of space-time, which is thought to bend around massive objects like stars and black holes.

If you're looking to refine it into a more traditional structure, like a quatrain (four-line stanza with a rhyme scheme), you might consider adjusting for rhythm and rhyme. Here’s a slightly tweaked version:

As black as night, so wide and deep,

Through time and space, a boundless leap.

It stretches on, without an ending,

A cosmic dance, with time it's bending.

Keep up the fantastic work with your poetry, Hayden!